Monday, October 26, 2009

Only For

a very ambiguous poem

meet me by the water


with feet facing black marble

there is a moonlit path draped for us


remember how we scaled the deep for
treasure etched along an ocean floor

of middle school crush sweet
heart innocence and faith

where dreams once had
no intention to age

but lining every year’s failed love

we learn that these treasures were a myth


so we refuse to near the sea

for the wintered waters


chilled our blood, split

the warmth from our hearts


so that when it rains it pours

and when it stops we burn


yet when she looks at me with her chin on my chest


i am swept with confused alarm

and am crushed by fairytales


of shy toes 20 mph prayers

secret kisses confessions and exhales


we forget our fears tho they

leak through the levies


and step forward

11 comments:

  1. "crushed by fairytales" kickass line.

    some great imagery and couplets here. "we forget our fears tho they / leak through the levies." sweet stuff.

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  2. cuz man, good to see u pursuing the pursuit of something meaningful in all the messes. hope ur doing good. ill b reading.

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  3. jeez i'm usually pretty critical of prose poetry but this was good

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  4. 좋다...바다의 해변을 걸으면서 감상을 하고 싶은 기분이 든다... :)

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  5. hey anonymous, thanks for the compliment. i really appreciate it! and u know... i think i know how you feel but i think you might be looking in the wrong places. check out some greats like ted hughes... and if ur into korean american poets, check out suji kwock kim. hmm... trying to recommend some people made me just realize that i don't read hardly as much as i probably should. haha... shnap.

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  6. is the "a very ambiguous poem" meant to be sarcastic?

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  7. "a very ambiguous poem" - if this is a disclaimer, stop hiding behind disclaimers and qualifications; it is sometimes okay to be a sap. who's (was) the girl?

    if i am reading this incorrectly, i will just say that i will remember the image of a chin on your chest for a long time. and i will wonder what it feels like (to be the chin).

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  8. incorrect richard, not to a girl, for said chin belongs to I. I can tell you what my chin felt like...

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